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More dark, death, and hatred-filled poetry.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Dark, mysterious, and iconic. I'm sure a lot of young individuals who undergo/experienced bullying in schools, such as middle school onto high school connect to what was typed. I can sense something around those lines of hurt and humiliation that caused you to feel in such a manner of "betrayal," however rest assured; I am no angel here to "comfort" you, it hasn't gotten better for me, I highly doubt it will for anyone else. There is a HIGH chance if won't if you've already stumbled into the black tar-filled sea of despair. The only chance for redemption is "revenge." Revenge is a dish well served cold, but who am I to type. Just a passing traveller. Keep up the good writing.